Thursday 20 November 2014

FOR TEAM VELOETOILE: Storyboard; panels added


These scene01 shots feature him pressing the brakes before getting hit, however it will be redone because we discussed that it was better to have him not look down and just press the brakes instead as he's looking foward.



As per Neil's advice, we wanted to drag out the scene after he wins the race and before his crash so that the emotional arc of the story isn't as steep (from a high to a low). We decided to make him doing something quite slow and pointless beforehand: tying his shoelaces.

In the second to last sequence, we decided that it reads better to have his hands go behind the brakes to show that he doesn't depend on 'braking' anymore.

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